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It started so simply that, at first, neither of them believed it. The sky didn't fall to earth; stars didn't go off and the seas didn't dry out…

Another pursuit of the blue hero ended late at night in the mountains. Her desperate and stupid gesture led to the meeting. The meeting of a lifetime.

The mission was to track down a satellite that night, so from the point of view of a random passerby, he was just sitting there and gazing into the stars.
Then he heard—

— "Ah... he's not here, either!! How stupid of me; now I'll never find him! And it's getting pretty late… —I know! I need to get in real danger! Then he will have to save me! He always does!"

His dark figure moved from the scantly lit spot and dissolved in the shadows. He watched a bruised pink female in a slightly ripped dress make her way to the ledge.

"He'll rescue me right away! Hey, don't be afraid Amy!" — She talked to herself rather loudly — "You can do it, girl!"

"She can't possibly…!" An instant thought crossed his mind while his eyes opened wider when that walking nonsense jumped off the cliff.

"Damn!"—that single word escaped his lips and he rushed to the border. Yet…

The dark hedgehog froze instantly as soon as a high pitched scream reached his ears.

"Sonic, help! I'm here! You can't possibly leave your one true love in danger, can you?! Soooooooonic! Come out, come out wherever you are!"

"How is that possible? She can't fly, can she?" he wondered while the induced Chaos Control warped his body to the bottom of the ravine.

His eyes weren't ready for the image that appeared before them. Amy Rose was hanging on the edge of the cliff with her hands.
The light dress was a poor cover for her body… especially for a viewer from below.

His head tilted to the left a bit without him noticing it.

In the meantime, the girl's voice became more hysterical than before.

"God, no! I'm slipping! Help, Sonic! Hurry, I'm really slipping! Please! Please!! SONIC!!! SONIC!!!"

With that name still ringing in the air the pink girl's fall started.

What was pure seconds to her felt like minutes to him...
In a rush of Chaos controlled space and time he jumped to her rescue without another thought. At times like that one, he'd act instantly — relying only on instincts.

A lucky catch left him standing on one knee at the bottom of the ravine with the prize in his hands.

"I knew you'd come for me…" Amy whispered softly with her eyes still closed.

Shadow couldn't do much about it when the hands of the rescued girl twined around his neck and… she imbibed from his lips. Something like lightning went though his body with his instincts going crazy. All his senses screamed, "Danger!" He almost pushed her away at the first second.
But then… it was warm… and soft… and… and no matter how odd and twisted that sounded to Shadow's mind, it was pleasant.

Amy was too consumed by the process to notice right away that she'd been kissing the wrong lips. Yes, she made similar mistakes once or twice before… but that kiss. It was the first one.
The girl felt that she finally succeeded. If not fulfilling her destiny, then she was closer to doing it like never before.

Neither of them were good at kissing, so their air ran out and they were forced to break contact.

She opened her eyes and inhaled at the same time.

Shadow's fairy tale was torn into pièces at the simplest remark: "Sonic, I… you are not Sonic!"

He feared she'd scream again and push away… but she just remained in his hands, not believing her eyes.

The stolen moment lasted longer than he had ever hoped it would.

Silence was his native element, so he did the only thing that he wanted to do at that moment.

"Yes, I'm not Sonic." His fingers closed in her quills.

The girl's lean body was clenched in a powerful grip of muscular arms.

Yet... he didn't want to do anything against her will.

Shadow simply wanted her to feel it. Feel that difference which her silly desires accidentaly led her into.

"Yes…"— She drawled while looking into the red depths of his eyes —"You're not…"
It's been a long time I haven't written a thing...
And now I'm starting that strange "third attempt" story..

Well it kind of fits into the challange Startling Discovery
- Create a fanart/one-page comic/fanfiction that shows how you believe Shadow and Amy would be introduced as a pairing on the video games, or other media.
of :iconshadamy-challenge:

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Давно это я ничего не писала...
А теперь начинаю эту странную третью попытку...
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ninjablade1 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
You should right how it ends. Like if they kiss again, if Sonic comes to rescue Amy but finds her kissing Shadow instead, and if Sonic does anything about it. :)
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shadamy103 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Filmographer
i LOVE your fanfics
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:iconkitty13k:
Kitty13k Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student General Artist
awwww:heart: How cute!!! :heart::
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Naya888 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012
i like sonamy but i like this more
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Shadowfan082 Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
pls pls pls pls make more! :D
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:icongiselvasquez:
GiselVasquez Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Student Artist
MAKE MORE!!!!!!
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SherbertTheHedgehog Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
HOLY CARP PLZ MAKE MORE!!!
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shadowmadhatterchaos Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011
Interesting even species of a different race can feel love :heart:
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:iconsensum:
sensum Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Plus well it's not love yet. It's just a stolen moment - that may or may not lead to love.
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shadowmadhatterchaos Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
true :)
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shadowmadhatterchaos Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011
amazing story :hug: :heart: I love this pic and the story that goes with it, interesting even people or animals or even creatures that are different can be loved :D
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sensum Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Interesting choice :giggle: The latest story...
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MarsInferno Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011  Student
That was nice.
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MariaTheHedgehoge Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011
Let me finish your sentence amy... "Your not... your so way beter"

^_^
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sensum Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good one :D I really should continue this :iconfinallyplz:
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MariaTheHedgehoge Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011
*Jumpes up out of my char* yes, yes YES.... a milyen times yes!!!!!!!!
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shadamy103 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Filmographer
lol
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cArDoNaNaVaS Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Professional General Artist
i love it!!
xD
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:iconsensum:
sensum Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm glad you do :hug:
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hopie123 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011
cute!
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:iconsensum:
sensum Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks))
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shafton Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i like it
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sensum Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm striving to simplicity and cannon lately...
Shafton... :O_o:
Omg, I haven't seen you for eternity man!!! :wow: How's it going?
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shafton Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
its good got back from the military and now im on leave
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:iconsensum:
sensum Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh! So you were actually away? Good that's your back and still interested in this silly subject. There aren't many men in this fandom)
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shafton Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
yes i am back and its good to be back. You know your right there arent many men in this fandom
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ShadowChaos24 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like it! :D
can't wait for what's next :)
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sensum Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Actually me too) I just need some of that inspiration to continue... I have many pictures to finish...
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ShadowChaos24 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, sometimes it's hard to find some inspiration.
take your time, I don't mind waiting. :)
i also have some stuff to finish up myself.
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maya1705 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011
this is really good :3
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sensum Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :nod:
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maya1705 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011
your welcome
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pokesonicgirl12 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011
Really sweet!!
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:iconsensum:
sensum Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :nod:
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blazegovana Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yaay, another attempt! :iconfinallyplz:

I've been so 'out of the loop' with Sonic stuff.. But maybe now I can catch up a bit!
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sensum Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think 'to get back in the loop' (if only i knew what it means :lol:) you should better play one of the recent games...
In Fanfiction you're only a guest in the authors mind and nothing else)
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blazegovana Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hm, good point..
I don't really have any games though, well I do, but they're all pretty stupid/lame etc.
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AlexR19 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011
This is what I expect Amy to do in that attempt if she did that. :D

Poor Shadow but at least he enjoyed it anyway.

It will be awesome if you continue it. I really enjoyed your short fan fictions of Shadow and Amy.
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sensum Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's the first chapter. At least I intend it to be the first chapter.

And what about the long previous story? [link]
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AlexR19 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011
It was really nice . I can totally imagine this to happen in that coversation she had with Shadow and plus they weren't out of character.
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sensum Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They were a bit. Shadow more than Amy with all of that sarcasm... He's a little bit colder than what I portarayed there.
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AlexR19 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011
Yeah it was kind of best that he stays cold than he is than something else. Just to be mysterious and not know what he is thinking in that mind of his.
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sensum Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Precicely what I'm going for in a recent work, a mute cold Shadow)))
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AlexR19 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011
Yeah it fits pretty well. It is better to stick with that kind of Shadow anyways.
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guitarAngel15 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Student
funny and sweet at the same time good job!!
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sensum Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :nod:
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Morning-Strawberry Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! :clap: Great job! I'm loving what I'm reading. Nicely done ~
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sensum Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's the first chapter of a new attempt. I'm glad you like it)
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kalika12 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I could totally see Amy doing that! :XD:
Great idea ( and story too ) ^^
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sensum Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me too) I mean she'd probably try to kiss Sonic if he rescued her. And she'd probably belive that if she gets in danger he will save her no matter what)
So probably no OOC here.
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